Friday, April 26, 2013

second novel of mine (english version)


well..this is a lil part of my second novel that i wrote in english version. hhehe im sorry for my bad english..if there's wrong words or wrong grammar -.-v xD still learning..hhehe feel free to give comment or critic on my novel :) ok then..happy reading :




I can't believe this. This is weird. What happened? I walked on the corridor dormitory, every corner of the room still looks as usual. But where is everyone? Why so quiet?

"Sob..." Suddenly I heard a muffled cries. I was surprised and relieved to hear the sound that signifies that there are other people here. Before, it was so quiet here. The only sound that i hear is my footsteps and my breathing until I thought I was the only person who was in the dormitory.

I looked around. No one. Where the sounds is coming from? I stopped, trying to listen to that voice and walked in the direction of the sound is coming from. The sound took me to a classroom in my right side. I see it.. A girl was crying under the table. I think I know who is she...

"Mia?" I called. She looked up and her face looks relieved after see me.

"Sachi!" She shouted and then came out from under the table and hugged me. "Thank goodness. I Guess I just alone here..."

"What is it? Why the dormitory so quiet? Where is everybody?" I asked after calm her down.

"I... I don't know. Suddenly I woke up and didn't see anyone here. This building is really quiet, I was scared and hide here. I'm so thankful that  you came!" She said with a smile of relief but from her eyes, i still can see her worried. "How about yourself Sachi? Where are you before?"

"Just like you. I woke up from sleep and rushed to class. I Thought I would be late but when I reached class I didn't see anyone and after that I realized that no one in this building except me, untill I hear you and find you in here," I replied.

Mia grabbed my arm. "This is so weird. What should we do now? We can't even contact anyone. Really don't have signal here!" Mia yelled frustrated.

"Maybe they all have been out of here. Hey why don't we just get out of here?" I held Mia's hand and asked her to run. We ran down the corridor after corridor and up the elevator to the bottom floor then run to the main entrance door. Locked.

"The door is locked!" I exclaimed.

"Then let's find another way," said Mia.

"Wait. Do you realize it? When run to here I saw all the windows were closed, usually there are at least a few windows open."

"What? Do you mean we are locked here? Why did they all leave us here?" Mia fell limp.

"Hey elected people." Me and Mia was shocked to hear the sudden sound of it. Whose voice? Where the voice is come from?
 

"I'm sorry before for everything that sudden and confusing. But you should be happy because you are the chosen ones. Amount you have 7 people, yes including you who listen to me now." It sounded like kids, sounded crisp but I can not tell whether the voice belonged to a man or a woman.

"Who are you?" I asked the mysterious voice, although I'm not sure that people also can hear my voice or not.


"You don't need to know who I am," said the voice again. "Obviously, I was the one who chose you to be a player in the game that I made."

"The game? What does that mean?" Mia whispered to me.

"The game is about to begin. Now you all let's go to the dorm hall, there is the start. Follow me if you want to save! Hahaha." Then the sound is gone.

"Crazy." I muttered.

"What? Sachi do you think we should join it?"

"Then what? That is the only clue for us to get out of all this weirdness. Come on!" I ran to the dorm hall. Mia followed me behind.

...

Me and Mia got to the front door of the hall. I turned the knob and stepped inside with Mia.

"Finally two people more is come. Now is complete! I can't wait to play this. What does that people want? Curious!" said a male student as he put his hands behind his head.

"Ken?!" call Mia.

"Oh Mia and Sachi!" Ken shouted and ran toward me and Mia. Ken is one of our classmates.

"Hey did you guys know how to get out of here? All the doors are locked. Ah~ why we must keep obey with that people? Smash the glass window and get out of here!" exclaimed a male student named Ryu who I know from the name on his uniform.

"We can't get out," said one of the girls among us who seem to be one of the players who were also elected. "Because we are actually dreaming. Our body were actually being asleep," she added.

"How did you know?" I asked, surprised.

"I just can feel it," she said without expression.

"Well... You all have gathered here. Now I will explain the rules," said the mysterious voice again. "What is one of your friend said is true. You guys can not get out of the game because you're actually dreaming. Everybody's in the dorm not leave you but it is you who are asleep. The Game time has been set so that later you will wake up and back to the real world but you will not get away from this game before any one of you be a winner. Though this is just a game, you will actually die in the real world when you game over. Don't talk about this game in real world or I will reset this game also your mind so that you will start from the beginning again. so let's cooperate. But be careful.. Because one of you is a character that I created and I play by myself. If I win, you will be forever trapped in this game and will forever accompany me to play. Hahaha follow the instructions that I will give you later. Have fun!" Then the sound disappears.

"Hey... It is cool right? We were in a game! I always played video games, I don't believe now I will really play in the game world itself!" Ken exclaimed enthusiastically.

"This is not a joke!" I said.

"Yeah Ken... Didn't you hear? Our life are threatened here," said Mia while fighting back her tears.

"Hmm about that..." Ken muttered.

"Then let's play!" said the girl that I told before. She have a long hair and beautiful. "I'm Akane."

"I'm Nami, and he is Mori." A woman who looks tomboyish student introduced herself and the boy next to her.

"I'm Ken."

"I... I'm Mia, and this is my friend Sachi." Mia introduces herself and me.

"Haih~ should I follow too? Alright, I'm Ryu." We introduced ourselves.

"Awesome. It seems to be fun." Ken muttered again.

"Ken... why do you always think everything that strange is cool?" I asked with astonishment. But... I must admit it. This is 'kinda' cool.

"So... which one of you is a creation of that people's character?" Mia asked as she shuddered in horror.

"If you ask... no one will admit it Mia." I answered. Also become shudder to think that people I knew were probably that mysterious people's character creation too, even Mia or Ken. Maybe they are not the original people in the game world in this dream. The safest Way is ME who should win this game. Now no one I can trust except myself."

---to be continued---

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